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by myth

person cimke
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, just the reaction I had expected of Daisuke!!! He is very protective of his Yuu-chan.
Love the moment he realized that it was actually his fault (well, he was the reason).

I'd like an update now ^^
person cimke
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, sensei always finds the right words. Love how Daisuke crumbles and cries in sensei's arms. And he heard the right words " You're always so selfish". Now it's time to face his beloved Yuu-chan and look forward.
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
These guys got what was coming to them, but Daisuke shouldn't have hurt Yoshimura in the open street ... ok, well, it's not like I would have acted any different in his place ...
And poor Yuuto! So frightened and Daisuke doesn't even notice!
I wonder what sensei is going to say ... he disliked the guys from the den before and now that they've beat Daisuke ... I think we're in for another suspenseful chapter.
Update soon! :)
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW Daisuke would flip a shit! I'm surprised he didn't go straight to Yuuto's house. I had forgotten that Tachi (is that the shortened name?) wasn't in the apt. at the time.

I got chills reading about how Daisuke went in there and beat the shit out of the people he thought were his friends. You would only do that if you really loved that person they hurt. And now he's gonna feel guilty; thinking it's all his fault b/c he owed them money. Ha, I think they would have done that anyway. Who knew they were a bunch of low lifes?
person Lala
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Must know what happens next, Yuuchan must have been scared like hell to piss on his pants... : {

Hope everything gets better from here.
person kylee123
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up but I am still speechless over the violence against poor Yuuto. I never imagined Yoshimura hated Daisuke so much.
person Lala
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh nooooo, it's Taka! DX

Daisuke should beat his ass up. And his friends' asses. I feel bad for Yuuchan though...

And sensei... When will he ever learn...
person Enamoril
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TORTURE.

Just... PURE... TORTURE!!! T_T OMG

AAAAHHH!!!!!!

Yuuto; one word. Run.

Leave Dai there, and run. Just run. JUST. RUN!!

Yeah I know this review is pointless, but that is one literal HELL of a cliffhanger.
person cimke
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So we learn interesting things about sensei which also shed new light on his motivations.

There is no way that everything will be as it was, my dear Daisuke & Yuuto. But it will surely turn out in an interesting way (and hopefully good).

A cliffhanger! Well it was bound to happen ^^
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Takimura (is that how you spell it?) is there? Is he gonna say something to Yuuto; how can you leave a cliffie like this?????????????

And wait; why couldn't Daisuke offer to pay for Yuuto in the arcade? His mom just left him money for God's sakes! He would actually make Yuuto leave by himself? How could he, after they were making such progress?

Anyway, you better update soon; I'll be thinking about this cliffie all night!!!!! lol

Oh, and I noticed you mentioned Wild Pitch; I kept meaning to ask you when you'll be updating it? I miss that story!