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for Tokyo Boys

by myth

schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, today is my birthday and you totally made my day!!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating!!!!! I was so missing little Yuu-chan and Daisuke!

It was so funny; I think I told you a few months back, that I'm also reading a story w/a main character named Daisuike; they call him Suke for short, and he has a younger brother named Akira.

Anyway....great chapter and welcome back! I'm glad Daisuike's mom and brother came to visit; he was really feeling lonely and no one should be alone on the holidays. Hopefully his bigot of a father will come around.
person Tempy
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg this was awesome, I haven't enjoyed a story as much as this in a long time. The way you write I can see everything so clearly and your characters are just gorgeous. I can't decide who I like best, definitly going to be stalking you for updates :D
person Bryan
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what the hell happened too the story? I'm still on chapter 39 and i want to know what hapens next. I dying!
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so get Moriyama-sensei's reaction in the end ... realizing that the person he's somehow been trying to get rid off now wants to be with someone else ... poor guy. He must feel so bad ...
On the other hand, yay for the boys! That night they spent together was unbelievably cute! Yuuto's innocence and Daisuke not listening to his body's urges for once.^^

I'm sorry to hear that you're going to put the story on hold, but I'll be there once you decide to pick it up again. :)
I love this story. Go, you! And good luck for NaNoWriMo! :)
person Reignbo
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(stands up and applauds) First things first. This story is so amazing! For someone who said from the beginning that you weren't a native english speaker...you could have fooled me! :D the story was very well done. I'm not gonna lie...it only took me 2 days to read the entire thing, and i probably would have done it in one setting if i hadn't had other matters to attend to. I was so into the story when i was reading it. I love the very definable personalities of the characters. I was most impressed by the fact that i found myself sharing a tear or two with timid little Yuu-chan, and even more so when Daisuke suddenly broke down. Your story just grabbed me. I enjoyed every minute of reading this story and i can't wait for you to continue it. However...i do have quite a few questions about it and i was wondering if perhaps we could communicate via e-mail to discuss it at length. i debated doing reviews at the chapters where i had questions, but i didn't want to read on only to have my questions answered later. the downside to not doing this however is that now that i have read all 39 of the current chapters...all of my questions have followed me XD. You are a very talented writer and i would love to chat with you about this story if you are willing and have the time.

Thanks for a great story so far! Keep up the good work! :D
Reignbo
person cimke
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww - now the story continues with Christmas in Decemeber, how fitting ;p

Lovely, heartwarming scene between Yuuto and Daisuke *_____* These two give each other so much without grasping how much it means to the other one.

Good luck with nano!
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I didn't read the chapter yet, but I just wanted to comment on your comments to my review. Yes, I know Daisuke loves Yuuto as a best friend, but yes, I agree with you: I think now when something really tragic happened, he realized his love is even greater than he thought. He feels more than just best friend love for Yuuto. And yes, like the Taylor Swift song; Yuuto was there besides him all along! Ok, now I'm gonna read the chapter!


Oh and also, I AM SOOOOOO NNNNOOOOOTTTT HAPPY THAT I HAVE TO WAIT FOR A WHOLE MONTH????????? I look for this story EVERY DAY!!!!! HOW CAN I POSSIBLY WAIT FOR A WHOLE MONTH FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!!!! No.... say it ain't so!!!!!!!


Ok, I got that out of my system; but I'm really not happy..... but will wait b/c it's one of my favorite stories on here.
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, it was nice Daisuke went to spend time w/Yuuto and i'm not even that upset w/him that he used sensei b/c he couldn't have Yuuto. But now I have to wait until December to find out what happens next. Grrrrrr


Ok, you go work on your other story; maybe you'll get done quicker than you originally thought???? Wishful thinking, I know. Anyway, good luck w/the other story and I'll be here waiting. (I'm pathetic that way!)
person Lala
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wah, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Hope it would be soon XDDD
person Lisa
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is the love Daisuke's talking about love as you love a friend, or in love? We know he loves Yuuto as a friend, and vice versa. I know that your heart would break if something that horrible happened to your best friend, but that doesn't mean you're in love with that person. And Daisuke told sensei that he loved him. Or was that more like he lust him? Hahah Idk; would Daisuke really just come out and say, is this love? Idk, maybe b/c he's so upset and guilty about Yuuto, his feelinga are really coming to the surface.

Anyway, it was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to Daisuke seeing Yuuto and trying to apologize (even tho it wasn't his fault) and trying to comfort Yuuto.

I know he was trying to keep Yuuto out of that "dirty" part of his life; I think he always thought Yuuto was too good for those people. And to find out that Yuuto went there and was taken advantage of; Daisuke feels that he "dirtied" or sullied Yuuto. Does that make sense? B/C if not for him, Yuuto would have been safe.