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by myth

person Jay
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'll try and cut Daisuke some slack, but it doesn't stop me from wanting to throttle his neck! :P Yea, he's enjoying his new experiences, but what happens when he starts to crash and burn. I'm just worried that his luck is going to start to change. He just seems so easy to take advantage of. Give him some alcohol, and then probably slip him some drugs, and then where's he going to be? Raped and bleeding in an alley? Oh, I hope it doesn't happen! :( I'll continue to hope that it will all turn out ok in the end.

Poor Yuuto. If I was in his situation, I really don't know how I could handle a friend like Daisuke.

Good luck writing the next chapter and I can't wait to read it!
person Jay
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I don't know how I want this story to resolve itself. Part of me wants to see Yuuto drop Daisuke as a friend/potential lover and move on to someone who will be there for him in every way and supportive. Daisuke's character can be so frustrating. Part of me wants to see him grow and mature and turn away from all these bad influences, and part of me just wants to yell at him and tell him he doesn't deserve Yuuto. He just seems so broken and unpure. Maybe I've been reading too many stories where two virgin best friends come to realize their feelings for each other and discover through naive fumblings what gay sex/love is about. *sigh* I also know that I can be quite the jealous/possessive person, so I can just imagine Yuuto's pain when he eventually discovers Daisuke's promiscuous habits. Good luck writing the next chapter and I can't wait to read it!
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Akira discovered Daisuke's secret! And I only nicknamed him Suke b/c there's another story on here and one of the main characters has the same name and his nickname is Suke. Anyway, so now Daisuke's gonna meet up w/the bartender, trying to network. Maybe, if he gets a job as a go-go boy, he can hook Yuuto up (like HE'D ever do THAT!!) and Yuuto's mom wouldn't have to worry about money anymore!!!!
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Em
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Em here again. xD I just read your latest chapter and I was very much impressed with the development. I feel bad for poor Yuuto, though he did kind of use Daisuke.

I was not expecting Tachibana to be a drag queen, either. >_> Then again, it /is/ Tachibana.


Well, it was a lovely read and I hope that you update soon. Really. I do. This is one of the best newer original stories written on this site. ;___;






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Please update soon!~ -begs-


Signed,
Em.
person kylee123
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the nice long chapter. Daisuke is having so much fun. I can see how normal high school life would pale compared to the nightclub life. I just hope Tachibana will take good care of him or he might get in trouble I wonder if Yuuto will be enough for Daisuke after all this excitement.
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, hopefully Daisuke isn't getting himself into anything he can't handle. I bet the owners will now want to hire him to be one of the go-go boys! Altho I like the guys in the den, I feel sad that they are "keeping" Daisuke further away from Yuuto. I mean Daisuke I know would rather be hanging around the guys in the den and going to the clubs; it just keeps him further from Yuuto. But....I am totally enjoying the story and can't wait for the next update! Before you know it, he'll be Suke the go-go boy!
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
its nice to finally find something that has grabed my attention in a long while, your work is so well writ than it just draws me in and i cant wait for more.
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I love the way Daisuke is so nonchalant w/his "experimenting" w/boys and how Yuuto is so uncomfortable w/it. They are such an opposite pair! I also like the college kids they met; they seem pretty cool. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Alumina
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far – and the characters. Can't wait to read more!