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by myth

schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was just thinking how interesting it would be to have the teacher's POV for the first part of the next chapter. So we know what HE thinks of Daisuke. What do you think?
person Mezzer52
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what?! potential spoilers? I think you should just send me an email detailing this. *waves hand in a Jedi like manner* :)

So Moriyama's rumors about a fling with a student? Maybe he will go for Yuuto then since you last described him as somewhat feminine...I can't remember...

Daisuke went back to Afterglow? :( *pout*

Filler chapter, but not bad. Can't wait until the next one comes out. Good luck writing!
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I'm surprised about that rumor too. I wouldn't think the teacher would risk his career like that. And if he did have that affair, why would this school hire him? Well, at least Daisuke is getting closer (friendly wise) to the teacher. Sorry, I can never remember his name! Oh, and btw: I think Daisuke AND the teach smoke WAY, WAY, WAY TOO, TOO, TOO much!!!!! As a person who's kissed people who have smoked, one word, yuk, ok, maybe two words, ewwwwww. Disgusting. Anyway, I CAN'T STAND smoking and smoke, so I cringe everytime I read that one person or another lights up. That's just my pet peeve. Anyway....great chapter!
person Mezzer52
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sell the house?! Poor Yuuto, and his mom works so hard too. Hmm, maybe if Yuuto got a job, one of his co-workers could be in the art club too? And then him and the co-worker could become closer all under Daisuke's nose! With Yuuto not having any more time to talk with Daisuke, would jealous-Daisuke show up realize his emotions for what they are? Can't wait until the next chapter!
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the way Daisuke ran to help Yuuto when he fainted. I love the way he's so protective of him. But, getting close to the teach is definitely in dangerous territory! And they have a whole week off in May? Didn't they just start school in April? lol
person kylee123
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter. It seems as if Daisuke is walking through life so carefree, and Yuuto is getting all the pain and punishment.
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this lots and lots! Cant wait for an update...
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully teach won't put two and two together and figure out that Daisuke is only in these clubs b/c of him!!!! And will Yuuto get jealous when he realizes this? But, wait, he shouldn't; Yuuto is straight. Yeah. So, great chapter! Looking forward to them both fighting for teach's attention in the visual arts club!
person Mezzer52
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heyo! Although a little short, it was still an enjoyable chapter! I really like Yuuto's development! (He didn't wait for Daisuke to walk to school :P yay!) It's great that another person besides Daisuke has given him some well-deserved attention and recognition, especially the healthy kind of attention! He's taking small steps in to his growth as an individual, and this new teacher recognizes the kind of potential in him. Very cool! Daisuke on the other hand still looks like the same immature and vain kid he is. I've never really liked people who go out and play "games" and just like the chase of a tough seduction, so that might be why he's not impressing me very much. Good luck writing the next chapter and I can't wait!
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hn I´d like to see how will look Daisuke if Moriyama-sensei would want to have Yuuto instead of him. :)
And will Yuuto meet with Tachibana?