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by myth

schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw! I'm feeling so sorry for that poor boy right now! How is he going to get out of there? Will he get away with beating that pervert?
Will his conscience haunt him and drive him back to Yuu-Chan? :D
I'm seriously excited. I already tired putting off reading the chapter until this evening, but now I'm left wanting more!
How cruel of you to cut this chapter short! :P

Oh, and yes, Brad did come into the lake. :P I know it's kinda gross, but he just did it before I could stop him!^^
More is definitely coming. I'm almost looking forward to taking the train to university every morning, so I can have some time to write.^^

And I really love your story, did I mention that? :D

@Lisa: "he's gonna wind up behind bars, where he'll have to be old Bubba's bitch!! And not get paid for it!"
This has GOT to be the best comment ever made. It made me laugh so hard. :D
person kylee
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Daisuke is doing everything with everyone except Yuuto. Waah! (That was just on my mind)
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK!!!! Did he kill him??????? Jesus, he better keep his anger and resentment in check; he's gonna wind up behind bars, where he'll have to be old Bubba's bitch!! And not get paid for it! And thank you for your comment; yes, I did remember he went to the hotel w/that dude and was surprised when he offered to pay him.
person cimke
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aha! There it was, the ugly reality. Daisuke being confronted with "special" wishes. I am glad that he hasn't detached himself totally, so that he was still able to refuse. I just don't think the boss will take having the well paying clients being hit into a bloody pulp lightly.
Poor Daisuke, he so needs someone to confide in!!!!
person kylee
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Disaster. Daisuke forgets that he works for the yakuza now.
person bambi
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh Daisuke...please say it iSN't yakuza business and they won't breAK HIS LEGS WHEN HE WANTS TO QUIT,
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter once again! This doesn't look that bad for Daisuke. Yet.
But I can't help thinking that he will get in trouble with the boss and have to hide out at Yuuto's.^^
I'd like him to accept help for once ... really looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh, and I published one of my older originals ... :)
person cimke
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, someone slowly getting close to the ugly side of independent life. Interesting how the conversation with about the "boss" showed that Daisuke's is not free of naivite and his absolute sureness of Moriyama sensei's desire ist just a further proof.

Very emotional moment how Yuuto tells so calmly Daisuke's he'd always be welcome. Short, but a milestone for me.
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I think sensei so wants him too! But jeez, now he's whoring himself out. Was he doing that before, I can't remember? When he first went to the clubs, didn't one guy give him money afterwards? And he kept it? Anyway, I guess he has no morals or conscience! lol Hopefully, if he goes "full service" he'll stay clean!
person bambi
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No Daisuke, don't take the easy way out. Everyone goes into prostitution in these stories when they get kicked out or at a loss of what to do for money. You are unique and different and approach life differently. Start a business or get hired for your brains or become an idol and make big bucks as a hot shot.