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by myth

schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally we get a little insight in sensei's life. His girlfriend seems a little psycho herself, though ... not even acknowledging Daisuke's presence ... kinda rude!
Yuuto's picture and Daisuke's feelings regarding him are so adorable! And how sensei senses his fondness ... so sweet!
I like this chapter. Daisuke didn't try to weasel out and he seems to be sincerely sorry for his deeds and for making Tomiko leave. :)
Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, so the sensei is bi and he is now gonna house Daisuke. And the bitch of a g/f left, so that leaves them wide open! Hahah Wonder if Moriyama (did I get it right?) is gonna try to hold his feelings in check w/Daisuke running around, probably naked half the time! Hahaha I can just picture it now!


But, on a serious note: it's good Moriyama saved Daisuke from "the streets" and degrading himself for dinero! (I hope I spelled dinero right; I've never taken Spanish)
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Duhn Duhn Duhhhhhnnn! Yeah he finally got caught let's see him try to weasel his way out now. I hope Sensei shakes him up and gets him out.
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fuck, you do have a knack for cliff hangers! That's a nasty one.^^
What will he do now? I'm kind of hoping Moriyama-sensei will somehow get him to admit his situation and be able to help him at least a bit. Maybe he'll even take him home to talk. :P
It's sad that Yuuto didn't do so well in the exams, maybe his scholarship is even endangered now! Hopefully we'll hear more about him again in the next chapter. :)

Thanks, Lisa! :D Yeah, I can tell. That's what I usually think about, too when it comes to that. :)
person cimke
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aha! Ahhhhaaaa! Sensei was stalked and the motivation for suicide. Interesting.

I looooove how Daisuke senses familiarity when seeing Yuu-chans picture. Also love his bratty act, new experience for him to have things go wrong.
person kylee123
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Sensei's girlfriend should never have left him alone in the house with Daisuke. I don't know if he will be able to resist temptation.
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i thought that was going to end worse for Daisuke than it did. i think Taichi would definitely stop him if he knew n give him a better alternative.
person cimke
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Daisuke, but that was bound to happen. Good for him that he is so pretty. That probably saved him from a tougher punishment.
So Moriyama-sensei arrived .Now I am curious to read how he will talk himself out of the situation ;p
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh FUCK!!!!! Shit, is he gonna be in trouble! OMG, I can't believe sensei went into the alley! Was he following Daisuke, or was he just gonna have a smoke break? Shit, I bet poor Daisuke is so embarrassed! How the hell is he gonna talk himself out of this one??????
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Myth, could I comment to a reviewer? To Lusches_reloaded: THANK YOU!!!! I'm so glad I made you laugh! Whenever I picture a "normal" guy going to the big house, that's what comes to mind: some big, muscled, tattooed guy making him his own beoytch! But thanks for commenting!

Thank you Myth, sorry for honing in on your review space!


Lisa