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by myth

person kylee123
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. Moriyama-sensei and Daisuke are so hot together. If only time could stand still. I loved this chapter. I knew there would not be a threesome.(just wishful thinking) I am desperately seeking a happy ending to this story.
person Lala
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! New chapter!!! I wasn't able to review earlier though.

That was good for sensei to tell Daisuke that he's not feeling love.

And O~! Daisuke will go to Yuuto's house!!! I can't wait what will happen there.

And the field trip +waits in anticipation+...
person cimke
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww such a cute brotherly scene! Love when you show the soft side of Daisuke.

Of course he's all cocky and bratty again in Kyoto! Poor sensei, how is he supposed to regain self-control ever again?
person Lala
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! New chapter!!! And Yuuto is practically on the whole thing! YAY

Tsk tsk tsk sensei... Why did Daisuke offer it on a cold windy night? DX

And poor Yuuchan, so lonely without Daisuke XD

Must know what happens next! XO
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, sensei has definitely lost all control w/Daisuke! lol I think he will miss Daisuke when or if he ever goes back home. Yeah, Daisuke being a teenager, fueled by hormones, is mistaking lust for love. Maybe, or I think probably, the more they are together, the more Daisuke's feelings will change. Maybe even sensei's, altho he won't want to admit it.

And poor Yuuto; "losing" his only friend. Well, for the moment. But it seems everytime Daisuke gets "distracted" with something or someone (the guys in the city, sensei) he forgets about Yuuto.
person cimke
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, such a sweet home scene. Cute wifey with pink apron ^^
Sensei had an interesting talk with Daisuke. I am sure Dai-chan will soon understand the difference between love and lust. Sensei already knows .... and knows the price.
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sensei is a bad, bad man ...
still, it's sexy as hell! Him and Daisuke, now that's hot. Poor Yuuto, though ... he doesn't even realize that he might be jealous of sensei.

Poor girl ... the female student, that is. At least she's still alive, but she really damaged herself over sensei ...

Once again, this is a really great chapter. I'm curious to find out if sensei will let something like this happen again - of course he will, but will his girlfriend find out?
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, I feel so bad for Daisuke. He's denying that he doesn't really care that his parents disowned him. How can a kid not care? Of course he cares. Thank God his mom cares; too bad she can't talk any sense into her bully of a controlling husband. How any parent could disown a child b/c of their feelings or beliefs, is unconscionable (is that spelled right?) and unforgivable.

Great chapter, hopefully Moriyama (did I screw that up?) can get thru to Daisuke's prick of a father.
person Lala
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! A new chapter! I like dialogue style better though. It takes much less words to get a point across without using many fancy terminologies. That's why it's very easy to read this <3

I can't believe that Moriyama sensei did it with him. I'm disappointed in him but who would reject such a nice offer? XDDD

Tbh though, my favorite parts in the story are whenever Yuuto's life is discussed.

Awww~ Yuuto is jealous!

And field trip... I can't wait to see whatever development happens on their field trip. >D
person cimke
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor sensei ... such a complete defeat. And Daisuke is such a smug bastard. Ahhh, Yuuto, do not doubt, you are still precious to Daisuke!