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person cimke
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You go Yuu-chan! Show your new cool self to the world and make them yearn for you!
Awww, so cute that scene in the bathroom. I am glad he is not that bothered about that mean girl, but more about the rejection in general. I am not surprised tho ....
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, poor Yuuto! I honestly thought that after Midori said those hurtful things to him, he would realize that he was having a nightmare. I can't believe it really happened and Midori said those things. Midori didn't seem like she gave a crap about Daisuke; it seemed so out of character for her. I really thought she liked Yuuto. I'm actually disappointed in her; I didn't think she was the type of girl to use someone else for her own benefit. And where did it get her? She never talks to Daisuke, and then she said she wasted all that time. What a bitch! It just seems so out of character.

Anyway, I feel so bad for poor Yuuto. Even tho he going for a "new" look, his personality will still be the same and that's what will ultimately "keep" a girl interested. (or guy) (Luckily for him, he has a great personality!)

person Lala
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm~ Looks like Daisuke is slowwwlyyy starting to feel sth for Yuuto. Now, how does Yuuchan divert his feelings for Daisuke?

And I agree with Lisa, I thought he would tell sensei about it.

person cimke
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, yes I like this one as well! You're such a tease! Hehe, there's sth growing and it's definitly not a body part this time ;p
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Daisuke might have some feelings for Yuuto (besides deep friendship). And how 'bout Yuuto? Will we hear his POV on the subject of Daisuke almost molesting him? lol

I actually thought Daisuke was going to tell Moriyama what happened w/Yuuto.
person Lala
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't able to review earlier because I had classes awhile ago. I was reading it through my phone in the car and it seriously made my day!!! I love the chapter so much that I read it twice ww

Finally! Sensei did something right this time. Hopefully he would be able to help Yuuto with his problems.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! <3
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why does Akira call Daisuke "brother" instead of saying his name? I mean, we all know they're brothers; it just seems weird not calling him by his first name. I noticed that in the earlier chapters when Daisuke was still living at home.

Anyway, yeah, I guess Daisuke, unintentionally, is corrupting Yuuto! And sensei wouldn't DARE try anything with Daisuke on a field trip, would he? That would be way too dangerous! Altho I know Daisuke could care less, as long as he gets some from his sensei! lol
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yay for two updates in a day! lol

OMG, I got chills when Yuuto called Daisuke. His poor mom, working herself to death. And poor Yuuto feeling so guilty; it's not his fault; why do kids always blame themselves?

I hope she's gonna be ok. Hopefully sensei will be able to get them financial aid or something? Why should the other kids ever know? Yuuto shouldn't feel so self-conscious. I know, easier said than done. My 11 yr. old is too shy to hand in a freakin' fundraiser to his teacher for goodness sakes, so I understand.
person cimke
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, so much awwwww in this chapter! Love the ending! Love Daisuke's soft side. He does care so deeply for Yuuto.
Sensei's situation is getting worse if he can't let go of Daisuke soon. There's trouble ahead!

Hmmm, Yuuto seems to be ..... jealous without knowing.
person kylee123
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sensei says that he loves his girlfriend, but if he really loved her, he would not be doing all this stuff with Daisuke. I think he feels that she is an appropriate match for him. Otherwise he would never have allowed her to leave him at home with Daisuke. Either way, I really hope nothing horrible happens to Sensei for being involved with Daisuke.