rate_review Reviews

Firstly, I want to say bravo on a job well done. I read this story a very long time ago and it is still one of the most well written fics I've ever read on this site. This was one of my first intros to this type of story but you did a great job at making the characters and their hardships seem universal. The characters weren't perfect which made them seem realistc - even when they did things I didn't agree with - and their character development throughout the story was perfectly paced.

I really love the story, and even if it was long I wanted more. I want to see how much more Yuu and Dai's relationship will progress ;)

I like how the story flowed.

Those were good finishing lines!
I loved your story. I lost the link for it for a while(after the rape)so I was sad.

The rape scene was grand( I mean it made the plot interesting and the story doable.)
Daisuke's and Yuki's relationship was building slowly and I felt like I was watching( in real life, or an anime) them together.
But I must be honest with you and tell you that ch 46 is not good.
The sex scene is shite.
I mean it would be passable if it weren't the thing we have been waiting for for at least 20 chapters!!!!
ANd just have does a horny adult goes about with the person he's been lusting after for two years?!
Gentle?
Skinny arms?
Vunerable?
Those things happen in a stable and secure relations,after ppl fuck each others brains out.
Which is what we all do when we get our hands on the person that hasd been out of reach a long time but see here*evil green* they're standing right next to you now and you're alone( or get them somewhere where you are alone).
ANd then again some of us don't mind audience while we're at it, they can join in too.
ROFL.
It is only my personal opinion of course, but it seems to me that you didi everything near perfection but the said sex scene, so I thought you could rewrite it, make it more credible?Or perhaps just because this review of a crazed fan you could do a more dramatic and animalistic alternate ending chapter? or just an alternate sex scene chapter.
Thanks for finishing th e story.

Wahh~
this ending was so cute! ^^
good referance going back to the painting.i liked that alot.
don't worry it was a good ending :) no offence but this story is loong enough xD
i really do love this story though. shame it's ended but all good thing must come to an end at some point
i guess :( hehe
i'm so happy Yuu-chan and Daisuke finally got together and are happy and comfortable with each other now ^^
i will comtinue to look out for WP story updates and any more that you create..? you're a really good writer
Please continue to write ^^

What's happening with WP??
i haven't seen an update for a while. please continue with that story too.. would love to know what happens after xD
xMoonlitx
p.s would love to stay in contact with you about updates or other story enquiries*sp* >.<
Moonlit_Slodger@hotmail.com
xXx

What a wonderful story!!! It was such an interesting read about those 2 boys growing up, growing apart and together again.
I wished it would be made into an Dorama! I'd happily watch.

Good work, you made me laugh and cry and suffer and enjoy with this Tokyo Boys!

Loved this story!!! Simply loved it!! Yuuto was so cute; wanting to tell Daksuike just how he felt about him, but Daksuike pretty much beat him to the punch.

I will certainly miss these boys; they have definitely matured since the beginning of the story; especially Daksuike. He went from a spoiled horndog, to a mature, caring individual.

Kudos to you for your wonderful writing and making me laugh, cry and root for these boys. You did a fantastic job!

Now I will wait for more from the baseball boys! lol

All good things come to an end~ Can't wait for the epilogue :D

Awwww! You go Yuu-chan! I am glad he made the move. Hopefully this will be the beginning of a lovely relationship for those 2 boys! Seems they are finally at home, these Tokyo Boys.

Yeah, 15 YEARS is definitely too long!!!! I was reading a story where 13 YEARS HAD PASSED and the two main characters HADN'T EVEN TALKED TO EACH OTHER IN THAT TIME PERIOD!!!!!!

Anyway, yes, you did a great job and WHEW!!!! They finally did it!!! Hahahhahaha!!!!!! Good job! Glad they're both on the same page now!