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by Kakashilover

schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! please continue writing
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hope james will understand that he is a person too with time...
LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very, very interesting story.
James is an enigma to me right now, can't wait for more =]
person kylee123
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot chapter two. I love how you are writing this story. I can see James desperately clinging to his idea of reality. After being a thing for so long he probably has no idea of what else he could possibly do. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
person dorome
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, i think this is hot. But please keep Daniel as a nice guy. I like the Idea of a nice Dom for poor abused James.
person vicxn
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, i like this. A really good plot and interesting characters. Cant wait for an update .
vic xx
person kylee
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it. Please update soon. This sounds like the beginning of a fantastic story. I felt like bawling at seeing how broken James was.
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I already love it. Your description is amazing, please update as soon as possible.