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for Thing---COMPLETE---

by Kakashilover

schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
did not expect daniel to tell the truth but so glad he did!
person kylee
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love Daniel! He deserves to get a serving of James covered in whipped cream for setting Ms Anita straight. I am glad for James' self esteem too especially after he just made breakfast. Yay Daniel!
person kylee123
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love Daniel. I am glad he is trying to be thoughtful with James I wish I could give James a hug too.
person dorome
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You made my day by adding two chapters! Really i liked them.
The shrink is not very reallistic when i think about it, but who cares, it is okay for the plot anyway. And the main charakters are believable. And i fell with them. SO please keep going.
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved the chapter! i loved daniel's way to convince james he is a person too!!! hope richard will not be a huge problem...
person Blue Rose
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, what a great story you have going. I have been reading stuff on here for year, and yours is hands down one of the best ones in a really long time. I love the plot. The characters are very well developed. I strait out cried at how mentally and emotionally fucked up james is. But daniel is helping that along great. Please done stop writing. I hate it when there is great stories going on, ant the author story mid-story, lol. Keep on the great job.
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so good, especially the hickey James gave Daniel! Yeah, he's gotta lot of 'splainin' to do! Anyway, it's good that James is opening up a bit to Daniel, but he has to learn to do that w/o sex. Just by talking. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully the whole p.d. won't figure out what's going on!
person kylee123
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great chapter. Daniel and James are so fantastic together. James must be feeling a little more confident to be touching Daniel and leaving hickeys on him. Your sex scenes are delicious. What a treat your story is.
person Faesy
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this. I look forward to the next bit. It's different and unusual but good.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
glad daniel is trying to help him! thanks for the fast update!!