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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can we have Anita killed off. I suppose she is making things a little more exciting, but I want to eat her alive a little bit.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am going to die if Daniel goes out with that evil Anita. I am really starting to hate her now. Does she think that blackmail is the way to a man's heart? Also Daniel is not supposed to leave James alone. I don't want anything else happening to poor James.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Anita's a bitch. But I still think Daniel's taking too much of a chance w/James; risking his job, his career. I'm still rooting for them tho!
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chaoter I am worried about Daniel meeting up with Antonio. Especially with that hickey on his neck. Antonio is probably going to be furious to see it. I hope Daniel can play it cool. I feel so sorry for James. He has been a slave to Anotnio. He never learnt how to read. Very sad. It makes you realize that his whole life has been a horror. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
happy that james is beginning to make his own decisions
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really love this story, the last chapter really got to me! I work with many illiterate children and you wont believe how it is for them when they start to really learn howto read and write! Their faces just brighten, and they are always willing to show you whatever new they leanred that day!
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the hickey explanation! A curling iron! Hahaha, my son used that one on me a few months ago and yeah, I didn't buy it either! Good one! And poor James, can't read, the poor thing. Great story!
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yikes. I get the feeling that Daniel should have stayed away from the evil Antonio. I hate Antonio for refusing to give James his humanity.
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for chapter 6!! i love how james is fitting into Daniel's life!
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, clueless blonde gets hit with a clue bat. He did the right thing. James is in a difficult position here
After Antonio is in jail, what happens to James? It's been mentioned that this is short term. I just can't see that being a good thing here.
After Antonio is in jail, what happens to James? It's been mentioned that this is short term. I just can't see that being a good thing here.