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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor james!
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hope james stays with daniel!
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anita should definately die now. Of course, Danny should probably killed for the crime of extreme stupidity.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending. I am only sorry that poor innocent Greg had to die. Too bad nothing bad happened to the evil Anita - aside from her prison term. I am also glad that Jzmes is doing well in society. He is such a sweet boy. Did you mention a possible sequel? I am looking forward to readingg it.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
We are quite the evil bunch - wishing a horrible death to Anita. Haha. I always get riled up by the female competition in these slash stories.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry this story's over, but it was great! I really enjoyed reading about poor James and Daniel and I was on pins and needles during the bullet chapter! Thank God you already had the last chapter posted! I was sure Danny was a goner. I also thought James got hit? Maybe I was wrong and just read it too fast. Anyway, great, great story and I'm looking forward to reading your next one!
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story!
keep writing!
keep writing!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hah! I loathed Anita immediately and was glad to see her put in her place right away. Of course, Danny is a complete idiot. Everyone is totally going to find out about him and James and he's gonna be shit canned and the investigation will be blown... Not that I don't enjoy the smexiness in the meantime.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shit, isn't Daniel gonna get in trouble for admitting that? I mean, is James jailbait? I forgot if you mentioned his age. Also, couldn't Anita, maybe out of spite, go to the chief and get Daniel in trouble? Can't wait for the next update!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH! I love this story. James is adorable. I just want to hug the poor kid, really. At least Danny is taking care of him!
I wonder what's going to happen, now? Is Anita going to have some big freak out? Is James going to get all confused about what being a "lover" means? Oh, I can't wait for an update!
I wonder what's going to happen, now? Is Anita going to have some big freak out? Is James going to get all confused about what being a "lover" means? Oh, I can't wait for an update!