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for Mr. Right

by wolfgirl

person sie
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eep! poor james and spencer ;____;!!!! though i do find it amusing to see james torture spencer haha
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a vivid imagination Spencer has! I was at the edge of my seat reading about his nightmare! Pretty scary...I hope that upside down cross doesn't mean Spencer is gonna be in trouble.
person Bexy31
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack, how creepy! :( Poor Spencer... I hope James is okay! And that he manages to escape whatever it is that has a hold over him... I like him :) (Unless he's evil, ha ha. But I'm hoping he's not) Looking forwards to the next chapter! :D Please keep up the great work ^_^
person Sie
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Weeee xD i love it
person kylee
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved the ending. My favorite scene was definitely when the swimming team caught them in the showers. I almost died laughing. Spencer's mom seems to like James. I hope Spencer will warm up to him too.
person Bexy31
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoo!! ^_^ I so hope Spencer's mum doesn't come home and catch them... James is pretty interesting though! ^_^ Like, his aversion to water and stuff... I feel sorry for Spencer, with everyone calling him names at school :( Bless him... Ooh, Lorie's not gonna be happy that James likes Spencer! :O Poor Lorie... But hopefully Spencer comes to like him more soon ^_^ I'm looking forwards to the next chapter! :D Please keep up the great work! ^_^
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Lorie's gonna be pissed! lol
person DekorxAo
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but finding out that this Mr. Right guy isn't human or demon or anything is kind of disappointing. XD It's almost like, fake love. Like he made his own version of Pinocchio or something, that kind of *has* to love him--not just love him for him. You know? Anyway, I'm glad you updated because I lurve this story! :D
person surrealtraversity
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love this story! I can't wait to see where you go with it. this is just too cute.
person kylee123
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Best Friends gone? I really loved that story. It was very good. I hope to see it one day in the future.

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