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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One last comment. I was just looking over my review and saw something that needed clarification. When I said that it seemed a bit forced or something in relation to the James/Spencer scene what I meant was that it seemed like Spencer was being influenced by something outside of himself to go through with the smexing. Maybe some magical influence that he wasn't aware of. I see now that that could have been interpreted to mean the writing seemed forced. That wasn't what I meant at all.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, good to see Spencer finally getting "closer" to James! LOL Good chapter; looking forward to the next one!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, James will get in trouble for lying about being raped and giving the wrong number to Spencer's mom. But, at least Spencer is giving James a chance and seems to really care for him. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, I really liked it. "Died at sea" lol.. Anyway, can't wait to read the next bit. I'm definitely looking forward to their first time.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm glad James is better! ^_^ And that he and Spencer are moving on in their relationship ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter :D Please keep up the fantastic work :)
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is sort of dark, but really good. I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon!
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved Chapter 5. I am glad that Spencer stepped up to find and comfort James. It sounds like they have quite the challenge ahead of them to set James free. Thanks for updating. I love all your stories.
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, good for Spencer for finally admitting his true feelings for James. I hope that James will be ok and that the demon won' attack him again!
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really am enjoying this story, but I think you might have made a couple mistakes? You mention his temperature is 180 in the hospital - I can't remember the exact temp, but I think it's something like 105 and there's no way a human could survive. Would definitely raise some red flags if someone went into a hospital with 180 degree temp ;) Also, you mention he's been the demon's slave for 3000 years, but he was a pilgrim - I think you meant 300 years? Just a couple things I picked up. Can't wait to read more!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Chapter four was fantastic. I hate to think that James was sent back to Hell because Spencer did not want him. It was hilarious to see Spencer's mom getting along so well with James - even inviting him to spend the night. Very good creative work on this chapter. I just hope James is okay.