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*gasp* Eek! Poor Spencer and James... I'm glad James managed to punch those guys out, but having Renatus as a teacher... Oh dear. It's sweet about Sarah and Lorie, too ^_^ I'm glad they're happy :) Looking forwards to the next chapter! ^_^ Please keep up the good work :)

Boy, I so did NOT see Sarah and Lorie coming! Hahaha Great chapter; yeah, both boys are totally screwed now!

OMG, Spencer's mom is too funny! They just can't get a break, can they????? Everytime they try anything, it's like she has a 6th sense and interrupts them! lol

Chapter 9 was awesome from beginning to end. Fantastic sex scenes. I loved it. Spencer's mother added a thrill of danger to the whole thing. It is funny that she wanted them to share a room and now they are hiding from her. Still I think that if she found them in the same bed, she would probably think they were just hanging out. She would probably freak out if she knew about Renatus and James being demons. Keep up the good writing. The story is going great.

Woooo Spenc got some Action! 'whistles'

Great chapter. I am glad that Renatus did not get a hold of Spencer but now I am terrified that his mother will walk in on them. Both boys are going through a lot of stress because of the relationship. Will they keep Renatus out of Spencer's bedroom? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ack, bad Renatus, trying to steal Spencer and put curses on him and stuff >.< I hope something really bad happens to him... And that James and Spencer live happily ever after, ha ha. Please keep up the good work! ^_^

Awww, James saved Spencer yet again! This type from a curse! And you left it at a cliffie! Hahaha Good chapter!

Love the new chapter. Love the extended love scene. Poor Spencer could not make up his mind but he seems to be a fast learner. I hope they can keep it secret from Spencer's mom.

Hi there. Thanks for the update. This chapter was a bit different from the others for some reason. Overall it was fine. Few observations. First, the deflowering scene without any type of lubrication was a bit out there. I mean, taking it up the wahoo is one thing, but isn't Mr. Right like really well endowed? Like seriously big? The other thing that stuck out was that Mr. Right came off as very sinister for some reason. If that was intentional then great. This comment in particular gave me the creeps: “I love that face you’re making.” James moaned, sliding the thing back up my ass. “I am going to miss it when the pain is gone.” Ummm... Yeah, that's the point where most sane people get the hell out of dodge, especially with some of the weird stuff going on around Spencer and his 'Mr. Right' lately. I was with Spencer. I kept waiting for James to pop out some horns and start going demon on him. The cross thing, where James took it off in/near the pool was a bit creepy too. Like I said, this might have been your intention and if so then kudos. Overall, I got the feeling that James wasn't as willing or ready as his actions seemed to represent. It seemed a bit forced or something. Jeez. I sounds like I didn't enjoy the chapter and that's far from the truth. It was just fine really. Just left me with a weird feeling like I shouldn't trust James. Like maybe he's up to something. Don't know how to explain it. Either way, I'll be looking forward to what happens next. Curiosity killed the cat and all that.