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for Brother, Please

by kristarain

person Anon
schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey i like how this has a bit of a story so far and it'll kill if you don't write more, so please do!
person Crave
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I want mor. Ideally now, as in this second. I was thinking 'there's bound to be tonnes of chapters' when I saw the first but apparently not so I'm on a one woman mission to secure those chapters. I really love the brothers, and I'm pleased you didn't make them too perfect, or the brother to muscular (I hate that) and I feel so bad for Rain. I'd adore it if you'd write more.
person Snowbell
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want more!!! cant wait for the next chap
person Dark_Angel
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going...chapter 2 please...I would like an e-mail update if its not too much trouble...thanx
:D keep writing
its hard to find a good brother fic. I like your style
person paul thompson
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Well-written and the addiction aspect is right on. Great job so far!
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!! :D
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really conveyed the emotions of detoxing. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Hopefully Rain gets thru the next week ok.
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh i'm interested, i feel so bad for rain though :[ but i have a feeling things will get better soon *wink wink*
keep writing :]
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You got me interested. I'd liked to read more, please.
person kylee123
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I like Holden and Rain. I would love to read more.