rate_review Reviews

I love the story and can't wait for more. I hope you can write more soon. The plot is terrific!
Sincerely Fanatic,
~Christo St.FitsKonstantin
(If you're still looking for a beta, I'd be happy to. My email is lilweirdo64_@hotmail.com or I also have a gmail accout christo.st.fitzkonstantin@gmail.com)

I love this story! It's so well-written, and I love the detail you put in about the characters. One of the best original vampire stories on here that I've come across, and I look forward to reading more.:D

Oh. Very well written story u have going here :) and can i just point out how much i want to glomp snow lol. Well I hope this story gets the most work done to it out of the stories u have going ;) and i hope to see another update soon! .... Pretty please??????

Another excellent chapter. I'm really feeling for all of the characters. You have a beautiful way of writing their personalities. I would be happy to volunteer to be your beta if no one else has. (I'll e-mail you right now.)

-Raine

Wow this is a fantastic story!!!!! I really love it!!!!!! I cant wait how this complicated triangle will work out!!! It seems everybody is in love with everybody although the Ashe and Snow do not seem to realize their feelings like Alec does!!! I really hope they will find a way together!!!!! And the slight smutt was absoloutly delicous!!!!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!! But anyway I think they all fit well together the three of them somehow complete eachother!!!! I really can't wait for the next update!!! See you next chappie!!!!!

I just wanted to compliment you on your strong opening paragraph and your vivid descriptions. I though the description of the feeding vampires was particularly well done, as was the description of Alec bursting out the door into the sunlight. I enjoyed reading the first chapter! You really have a gift.

I enjoyed this prologue. I Look forward to more of this story, as it has definite possibilities! You may want to proof a little better next time though, there were quite a few mistakes, a few of which made the sentences confusing. Please update soon!