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for Ocean Storms

by Babisko

schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Someone got a kiss! ^_*
person Avernion
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I LOVED that ending. He he he he. >:D Ohhh. I want to know his reaction XD It's going to be so fun. Ha ha. But why was Angel in such a need to kiss him? Of course, I can understand why you would want to do that, but still ^^ Laugh.

Muuust
Knooooow
Morrrrrrre

Angel fishes giving sweet angel kisses. Lol ^^
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well them I hope they are quick updates for us impatient people who like everything now. ^_^ finally you fed the poor boy? Man? Merman?
person Avernion
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... So Daimen's immortal and doesn't eat with the rest... Hm hm hmmm...

Angel was so cute in this chapter XD I'm glad he finally got some food in him. If he eats stuff on land, it makes sense that he was there in the first place. Can the big bird-thing really be one of the scientists like I first though, or is he the fish's natural enemy..?

Oh. And John needs a boyfriend. Badly. Or did he have family? Laugh. I don't remember ^-^
person wollfyn
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's official...I'm addicted to your story. It's a serious medical condition with no cure in sight. Save one. More chapters!! *grins and winks*
I can't decide who my favorite character is. I like Damien. He's a mysterious guy. Lots of secrets that I'd like to know. Then there's Angel. Myth come to life. The way he was indecisive about where to bury the watch was cute and humorous. And strangely I found Kevin standing out as well. Dunno why, though. Maybe because he was the first to communicate with Angel.
I hope your muse supplies you with an abundance of ideas. Keep them chapters coming! I want to see more of Angel purring contentedly in Damien's arms. Great work!
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
who/what is this creature? I´m very curious
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that's just too cute. So what is Dami?
person Avernion
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A hungry bird-thing on the lose and our angelfish sleeping with a sore throat. I wonder what they will do now when the tank is broken. It's not really something you have casually lying around in your closet. The again, their scientists. They'll figure something out.

Who and what is that bird. She recognised it without recognising it. Hmm...
person Avernion
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww. What a cute ending. I have no idea why the fish is purring, but it's cute =^-^=

I'm a bit surprised that Damien ain't thinking that Angel might be a bit connected because Damien has some power-thing going on too. He do know what he is, right? Welllll, that's just my own little thinking. ^-^ Maybe he just thinks Damien’s hot. ^-^
person Avernion
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh... What will Angel dooo >:3

If the kid is annoying, I hope our lovely little merman eats him <3