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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading all 13 chapters available. It's an interesting story.
It's the 1st mermaid story I've read with mermaids (merman in this case) as you described. It's unconventional.
Let's see, if I got it right the fixation Angel seems to hv with Damien goes way behyond the fact they'r both imortal mitical creatures. Is mating season on the way? =3
The siren... could she possibly be the real Mrs. Barslow? Or might little Kevin not be as innocent as he looks? hmmmmm no... I don't think so, Angel & Damien would'v felt something different about the boy if that was true, right? Btw what would Mr. Barslow's interest in mermaids be?
I'm intrigued. Please update soon!
It's the 1st mermaid story I've read with mermaids (merman in this case) as you described. It's unconventional.
Let's see, if I got it right the fixation Angel seems to hv with Damien goes way behyond the fact they'r both imortal mitical creatures. Is mating season on the way? =3
The siren... could she possibly be the real Mrs. Barslow? Or might little Kevin not be as innocent as he looks? hmmmmm no... I don't think so, Angel & Damien would'v felt something different about the boy if that was true, right? Btw what would Mr. Barslow's interest in mermaids be?
I'm intrigued. Please update soon!
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update. I've missed this story =^-^= Nice twist with fooling us with that woman's identity.
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update. My favorite scene in this story is in chapter 4 when Angel hides Damien's watch. So cute. Kind of reminds me of Jay. I am glad Kevin's mother is not dead. I like how Angel was getting physical with Damien. I guess he forgot that he as biting a vampire. LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow, I LOVE this story! This is yaoi_lover_dokusa from fanfiction. I'm so happy that I found this story over here, cause I was crying to know what happened next... lol. This story is so intensely wicked, and i can't wait for some yummy goodness to come forth :)
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. what a cliffhanger. I hope Kevin's mother is not dead. i can't wait to read more.
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's perfectly all right. I've ben craving one anyway. Finaly you told us what he is.Yay you!
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, an evil cliffy! Interesting. Most interesting :D
So he was a vamp after all. He he, I knew it! I was totaly sure though, that the bird-thingy, hurm, siren, was one of the scientists. You sure tricked me ;P
And about the italics, don't feel stupid at all. The only reason I know is because I had to struggle with it too when I began to write my stories ;P
I can't wait for the next chapter. Like they say in McDonald's, I'm loving it =^-^=
So he was a vamp after all. He he, I knew it! I was totaly sure though, that the bird-thingy, hurm, siren, was one of the scientists. You sure tricked me ;P
And about the italics, don't feel stupid at all. The only reason I know is because I had to struggle with it too when I began to write my stories ;P
I can't wait for the next chapter. Like they say in McDonald's, I'm loving it =^-^=
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
But which one of us? Please tell me! Pretty ease with what ever you want pulled high on a bannan split.
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One of us Merpeople, or one of us not quite human? Angel, Angel.
Oh, and you want to use itallic, this is how you do it:
You want to mark red roses, then you write < I >red roses< / I > And its in italic ^^ So you begin with < I > and end with < / I > There's not supposed to be any space between the letters. ^_~
Oh, and you want to use itallic, this is how you do it:
You want to mark red roses, then you write < I >red roses< / I > And its in italic ^^ So you begin with < I > and end with < / I > There's not supposed to be any space between the letters. ^_~
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a surprising plot twist! So Damien is one of them? Wow. Can't wait to find out more about his past.