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for The Shadow I'm In

by Missa2308

person anon reader
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while and there hasn't been any updates, so I will be removing this off my bookmarks.
But if the author one day comes back again and write,
YOU BETTER BE READY, BECAUSE I SURE AS HELL AM COMING BACK.

Until then, see you soon, one of my top FF!
person Narcoleptic
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They finally kissed! *happy dance*
person Talltree-san
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally read all of the available chappies. I really like it so far, can't wait for the next chappie :)!
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realize the health problems you have. I will be praying for you and I hope you can have a full recovery. Don't worry about the next chapter; your health is more important. Just send it to me whenever and I'll get it back to you immediately.

Now Basil....I would never in a million years think that Scott was in cahoots with Ken this whole time. Whatever Scott is hiding, it can't be that! My God, your own BROTHER? Of course Basil had no idea that Scott's been telling his friends to leave Basil alone. And Scott did sound so sincere. I can't believe that he would do that. So now of course I'm really curious as to what he's not telling Basil.

And the kiss. I want to say ewwww b/c they are brothers. Also b/c I really, really like Roden. But mainly b/c they're brothers and Basil already has an unhealthy attachment to Scott. He needs to find someone like Roden; who is appropriate. Not your brother. But then again, I would like to thank AFF for corrupting me! I have read stories with a little incest in them, you know, twincest and shit like that. So I am corrupted and no longer innocent in the ways of siblings, or cousins (seems to be EXTREMELY popular for some reason, lol). But I'm still rooting for Basil and Roden.

Now the trial. I know Basil is gonna have such a hard time reliving that day for the court. Maybe he won't have to take the stand. Nah, he probably will. He's gonna need all the support he can get. I'm hoping his 'mother' actually comes thru for him and acts like a goddamn mother. But I doubt it b/c she's a bitch.

Excellent chapter Missa! :) And I do hope you recover as quick as possible.
person papu
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Are you serious about the brain tumor thing? Well, hurry up and finish before it gets any worse. That was such a cliffhanger.
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, its one of my favorites! The writing is to an amazing standard and the plots great as well. I know its been a while but I was hoping you would continue this story, it would be a shame to let it go to waste!

Harriette
person reader
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far! Can't wait to read more :D
person someone
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon ><
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I, love this story! Although I am only on chapter 8 I am loving it more and more. Ken, is an asshole, and his brother needs to get to it!

I noticed a few typos though, I thought I'd point them out: flowers blowing and brushes trimmed.-Blooming?- ; I still have first dips.” Crimson’s mother -Dibs?-; n all, this house stuck out like a soar thumb, though it was a very pretty soar thumb. -Sore x2-

Keep up the wonderful writing, and I can't wait to finish reading! -Don't take offense to me pointing out typos, I mean no disrespect at all.- Thank you for your story!
person addiena saffir
schedule December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating.