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for The Shadow I'm In

by Missa2308

schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story, I felt compelled to review it. I can just feel the self-consciousness of Basil, his insecurity. He's constantly looking down at the floor, not making eye contact. I feel so bad for him. This thing w/his brother, he won't even say his name when he thinks about him. It seems like his brother has similar feelings. Anyway, great story! Hopefully you'll update soon??????? I can't wait to find out what happens at dinner! I love Crimson; she seems like she'll be a good friend for Basil. (Is Scott jealous of her?)
person Nessa
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! finally more Scott in the story. I'll be looking forward for more interaction between those two.
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person GellyBelly
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG! You updated!! WWWWEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
person anon
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really liked this chap!
person Anon
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful
person boots
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story hav been following it form the begining.
Just wondeing if u r ever goin to update? iy has been a couple weeks now and i am dying for an update!!
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my 8O Now, I really AM wondering what's up with everyone's behavior towards Basil. It reminds me of myself XD I hate getting close to my family, it feels too awkward. Anyways~ Sweet ol' Basil just seems to break my heart with everything every time ;o; No friends? I couldn't dream of it! lol, and closet rich. Thanks for the updaaate!
person jhdfshjds
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE YOU. YOU ROCK. YOUR STORY ROCKS!
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
we need to see more of Scott in this story.

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