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for The Shadow I'm In

by Missa2308

schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I'm sorry for your awful summer. How do you burn your feet? Well, if it's any consolidation, the chapter was great! I really liek the rapport between Crim and Basil. And Crim is observant, but I don't think it's anticipation on Basil's face when he looks at Ken; I think it's anxiety. I'm glad that Crim's family is being so nice to Basil; if only his family treated him the same way. Now I'm anxiously awaiting the next chaptet!
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I was just reading my review and noticed I misspelled like. Sorry; I HATE when words aren't spelled correctly. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
person kylee
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am sorry to hear about your feet. Great chapter. Basil needs to find a way to defend himself against Ken. It must be very painful to have Crimson thiking that Basil likes Ken. I am eager to see the two brothers get together. This was one of the first stories that I ever read on AFF.
person bambi4real
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Basil's back. I did begin to wonder what ever happened to him. Sorry to hear about your feet hope they start to feel a little better soon. What is this twist in here with the implication that Basil likes what Ken does to him? I sincerely hope that there is no subconscious desire for Ken on Basil's part because personally I think he is an ass and doesn't deserve someone as sweet as Basil.
person Akagypsy
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God I love this. This is seriously amazing. I can't wait till you update so that I can see more incesty action. Ken should totally get his ass kicked. Hopefully by Scott.
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is really amamzing!! Update soon!
person Sie
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hiyo, uhhm i was curious if you had a mailing list for your ficlets or if you did a mass email to people who wanted to know when you update...i woulda emailed you but... you didnt put it into your profile and it says its hidden :( and aff.net >__> seems silly and doesnt have one of those 'alert me' like normal ff.net does lol if you did ^^ please email me at littleayeka@hotmail.com because that would be loooooverrrrly <3
person Ao
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww that sucks! I'd go crazy without my laptop! Gah, I was really happy to see this story updated. I want more! I'm a greedy bitch, and you need to update!!

Ahh, I'm sorry. I meant to say: I love your story so much and can't wait for the next chapter! yay!
person GellyBelly
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so glad you finally updated!! WWEEE! I hope he doesn't get rape again!
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see this story back!!!!! I was enthralled w/it the first time I read it; I had to reread it to remember everything correctly. Poor Basil, his family makes him feel like he's invisible. And obviously Scott isn't good w/communicating either. On the other hand, I LOVE Crimson and her family; totally a hoot! Looking forward to Basil finally having some fun and making new friends!

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