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Incredible! I can't wait for more! The one scene that I am eager for the most is when Basil's parents realize the pain he's gone through and when Scott realizes what Ken did to his baby bro...Great job!

Hi.
I would like let you a long and wonderful review.
Really.
But i'm italian, and write in english is a bit hard to me.
I don’t like particularly mangle innocent grammars, and I would preserve you and the others from my havoc.
So... easy and briefly: I really love your story.
It's so deep and real!
Your protagonist's characterisation is awesome.
So powerful!

And (let me giggle a little whit my fangirl attitude) Basil is so cute!!!

This story is mostly about Basil. Scott still doesn't know at this point that Basil has been raped or anything. There's no reason for Scott to take more interest in Basil all of a sudden. Their relationship is still as it has been before.

Therefore until it comes out that Basil has been raped, Scott is still going to act like he has been for the years that Basil has been around. It’s a slow process. No relationship that has been around for years (especially with two brothers) will change over night just because. But we are going to see more of Scott. He becomes a major character in chapter 12. That’s what I have planed.

I like this story so far! I can't wait to read more and see how the rest of the night goes!

If this story is supposed to be about Scott and Basil, how come they're not getting closer. Their relationship is still at the same stage it was in the beginning of the story. They don't interact much. Crimsom is more a protagonist then Scott is. Heck, we barely ever see Scott.

Yay for the new chapter. Good luck with your feet.

Yay! I love this story, Basil is so cute! XD

Crimson is a bit annoying! Though not in a way that makes me hate her, i just wanna kick her in the shin for making poor Basil eat a slug! lol

I love this story! Thanks for the update!

OMG, I didn't realize when your feet got burned you needed plastic surgery! It sounds so painful; I wish you luck!


This chapter was great! What a pain in the ass Crim is; I mean jeez, Basil didn't want to try the damn snail, so let it go! I HATE when people try to force me to try something I don't want to try!


I'm looking forward to the next chapter and how the kids decide to sleep! lol Good luck w/your feet! And have a happy holiday!

Thx for the update