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for The Shadow I'm In

by Missa2308

person Anonymous
schedule July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god I want to know moooore!!! <3 Scott is so cute!! <3

person RitsuO3O
schedule July 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really love this story, hope you update soon :D

schedule March 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. I can't wait to see what will happen. Xoxo Robin
person Tahn
schedule January 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Why is he acting like he's surprised his brother would kiss him? He's all, "But we're brothers." Doesn't he have the exact same urge in his head? I mean, his obsession with his brother is gonna ruin any chance he has with anyone else, so why is he questioning it when his brother seems to be on the same page? I'm also guessing that rapey guy found out about Scott's crush on his brother and was using it to keep him in a relationship with him, then Scott got tired of the blackmail and said, screw it, don't even care. At which point Ned takes it out on the one person who Scott cares about most as revenge. Just a guess. I say go for it, if you are gonna harbor thoughts about your brother, then act on them when the opportunity knocks, instead of letting Scott think he's thinking it's something he doesn't want.
person Midnight2Rapture
schedule January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OK I am so not into incest. But your story has really got me wanting more. Can't wait for the next chapter. And if you still need someone to role-play with you I love doing role-play. And it never matters to me whether I role-play as a female or a dude.
person Jess
schedule January 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So happy about getting this chapter! Keep up the great work!
person anon~ish
schedule January 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was worth the wait really it was! I'm not sure who to root for though.... I want Basil to get what he really wants without consequences I mean Basil could be I don't know maybe mom fooled around or Scott was adopted or just grrrr... Thank YOU for updating!
person Coral
schedule January 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story can't wait to see where this goes. I love Roden. If I wasn't already rooting for Scott and Basil, I would be team Roden all the way. XD
person bambi
schedule January 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really did believe I was misreading the words on my comp when I saw this update. I haven't seen an update for this story in a dog year! I am sooo glad you packed it chock full of action. I feel like I have been waiting forever for the brothers to get together. While the date with Roden was cute and the little old biddies were a nice touch, nothing compared to the Scotty kiss!
schedule January 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I read this through until the recent update and all I can say is thank goodness that I didn't come across this story before. It's been really slow going, Scott only NOW feeling pressured enough with the presence of Roden to finally do or talk about anything! It was quite unfair of him to have so unwittingly taken away Basil's first date high. The poor thing is now dampened and won't even know how to show his face to Crimson the next day. "Your relative kissed me, but so did mine." Scott really needs to figure out what he wants already, it's been 24 chapters and he's still at a standstill. At the very least, he needs to come to terms with himself.