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August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very good please update
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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:) good
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NEEDS MORE!!!
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I like it. This is really interesting and well written. One thing that disturb me, though, are the many ellipsis, I think they are maybe a bit abrupt and too numerous.
But I like the story, I'm hooked up, and I look forward to see what comes next!
This look like a good original fiction so far.
Bye!
Black Sharne
But I like the story, I'm hooked up, and I look forward to see what comes next!
This look like a good original fiction so far.
Bye!
Black Sharne