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for Coming Home

by brebaby947

person Anon
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Can't wait for more.
person daveb
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, but that better not be the end. Make it a happy ending (with them together) plz.
person daveb
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. Five stars.
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
definitely continue! I'm anxious to find out how Sean and Cheyenne's relationship progresses throughout the story, especially since they have no parents and are/will be only surrounded by friends.
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I like it so far and am looking forward to see where it goes.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter; the bit with the mother doesn't really make sense to me, but that could just be me.

The second chapter, on the other hand, somewhat frustrated me. The relationship between this Randy fellow and Sean really doesn't make sense to me. I mean, yes, I have friends that I don't exactly approve of, but it seems like Sean doesn't approve of Randy on any level. So why are they friends?

But, other than that, I like it. It's a good depiction of what seem to be high school students, and the lemon wasn't bad either.

Looking forward to more.
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. smiles
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Loathe Randy though seems like trouble..