schedule
August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was starting to get good.
keep going. :D
keep going. :D
schedule
August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have to say that your story is off to a good start, but its kind of confusing to me...Do you have a beta? I would be more than happy to help out a fellow writer. Your characters seem to be off to a good start too, but they need some more development, I could offer a couple of pointers if you're interested.