rate_review Reviews

This is a really good story. Your grammar is kinda bad but the story is still good. And I love the characters.

This story is very good so far. Devin seems slightly too forward for someone so confused, but it isn't unbelievable to see someone act that way. Honestly, I really like it.

awsome stroy. please update soon

hey, i really like your story.
i hope you update soon =D

Nice story, liking it so far. I hope you get your PC fixed soon.

arrgghhhhh (this is me fawnheart again, in my serious suit) that was so beautiful. God I love maddie, deadset, I can see why Devin is falling for her even though she doesn't swing that way (she thinks, yes? o.0). Maddie's just too cute and sweet and genuine and just lovely. I love it that she didn't just swoon and let Devin have her wicked way with her - as much as she wanted her to. She's smart too, to see that things could have ended badly if she'd let her. I love this - I love your little a/n's too hehe. Why shouldn't you hit someone on the back if they are choking? I always do that... eeek.

So yeah, good luck with the confusing stuff in your life and as for your GF, it doesn't matter if you window shop as long as you don't buy :P and besides, we'll miss out on this story if you stop lol. Really a very nice, sweet story and your characters...just magic. I love them. Well, I love maddie best. Well done!

good story.
found someone else who's bad at updating.

i just found and am definitely liking this story...maddie is a great character and i am totally hooked. the interactions between her and her mom and and her and devin are totally believable. i love how obvious it is that devin cares about maddie and that maddie has no clue about it. and the tension is getting really noticeable between them, too. i hope you keep writing cuz i want to know what happens next!

I don't usually read f/f, I don't know why I clicked this, but I'm glad I did. It was probably your blurb thing, it was catchy. Well, I really really like this story. It's really genuine and sweet. I was interested to see that Maddie was the mmm, I don't want to say victim, but the one doing it tough. I think I tried to read one other f/f once and this chick was trying to save this other chick from her using boyfriend, while she was still 'with' said boyfriend...it just didn't seem realistic to me since you can only suspend disbelief so far but this? Definitely not what I expected and even better for it. Maddie is so sweet. I just wanna hugs her! Your characterisation is just fantastic. I just love her already. So yeah...update, I really want to see something nice work out for her, and gawd...I can't remember the other girl's name, I'm too besotted with Maddie...but yeah, I like her already too, not as much as Maddie though. But she seems to have a nice mix of sensuality and caring...just beautiful. I can't wait to see how this pans out. Keep posting, I'll flag this and keep cracking the whip on you hehe. It really is a nice, sweet story, I'm hooked already. I know i've already said this but it's so genuine, it's squeezing my heart. Loves it.

I like the story. I'd read the first chapter once before, but I, honestly, had to reread it because it's been so long. I hope you update sooner. A review is a meager price to pay for a nice, long update. :-)