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for Big Poppa

by Laevi

person eroburn
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent.
i await for these chapters.
i only fear that you will end this story soon
and i will have nothing to look forward to
person dibhuman
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you haven't finished it have you?? there is more right??
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Busted. Knew that was coming. You can't keep this kind of attraction quiet. It's like trying to herd water.

KD
person Reike
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww they're sooo cute!
I like how Poppa seems to have a two track mind: food and sex.
Loved it!
R x
person wynja
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read all of it from beginning to end and I most say I'm surprised and delighted! I never expected this to be both hot and a true romance! I fell completely in love with the characters and will look forward to the next update eagerly!
person eroburn
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
funny, warm, and brilliant as always.
liking this story more and more each chapter is read

-eroburn
person RJaneyP
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story, great Characters...I can't wait to read more. G
person Reike
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha the ending of that chapter had me in stitches.
"Did he suspect anything?"
Anal lube written on the tube...ahh that was too funny.
I love these two for some strange reason.
Great story =)
R
person Kip
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved this! So glad I didn't discover it until you'd posted all 12 though - would have just about broken in two if I'd had to wait to find out what happened! It just flowed from start to finish, and the characters were beautifully brought to life. Thanks for a really enjoyable read! 'Purr
person Reike
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha I like the innuendos!
This is so different from anything I've read!
I'm really liking it.
Awaiting more.
R