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I like this story please continue.

Great job with this chapter. You've kept the characters true and didn't just force them into something unnatural. Its good that they have an arrangement made by Seth, cause the rest just wouldn't have been very realistic.

I think personally, I really like Seth in your story, even though he's a vampire he still has all these emotions he's battling which makes him more, some people might say that its very unvampire like, but since they were once real people why shouldn't they have real feelings? I think I mentioned before that i like this story becuase it has no torture in it and I'm glad you haven't put any in.

Thanks for saying what Ennui means, satisfied my curiousity there. Please dont abandon this story any time soon, it would be a real shame and I'd really like to know what happens with those two and the other guy who's name I can't remember to the shame of myself, I'm terrible with names.

Cheers, *hugs* Aduial

I like this story very much. I appreciate that you have told Li's story relatively early on, not making us wait to figure out what is going on. I also like it that Seth can't really keep his hands off Li, even though he is creeped out by Li's desire to feed him. It *would* be really creepy to have someone move in next door, knowing all about you, and suddenly come on to you, so i can see why Seth doesn't want to have anything to do with Li. It should be interesting to see how you bring Seth around. Please keep this one going.

Awww, this story is so sweet. I guess Jonas is the guy who left Seth all upset. I hope that Seth and Li find happiness together. I like the way your taking this. I'm usually not one for vampires finding their mates, but you've managed to make it real good.

I love the way you don't have anything horrible going on, like violence or stuff, cause lots of people do that in vampire stories and its not very nice, you should be nice to your characters. Please don't make me wait to long for the next chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Just a question, what is Ennui? I mean, I didn't quite get that, maybe I'm too stupid or something, I don't know. Thanks for this, *hugs*

Interesting start, looking forward to seeing how this is going.
JAD xx

Great start, keep it up.