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for What We Didn't Do

by JAD

schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My story is the same, no one reviews - it is a good story though and I have been reading from the beginning. I don't always leave a review to everything, but I rate it at least
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
person JAD
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it's good if you leave your vote because that helps as well, it's just that over 800 people have read it and I have no idea if it's just a quick glance or if people do genuinely like it!
I love all my readers, I really do!

JAD xx
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know its not nice threatining your reader for reviews. Shame on you. Okay now in all seriousness this story is cute. The chapters are a little short but I'm have no right to complain about that. So I like the story and I hope you continue to update.
person JAD
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the reviews and for sticking with me!
I'm taking a break from the writing for a little while but if you guys are REAL desperate I might make an exeption ;)
Thanks xxxx
JAD
person Saminada
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwww!! GREAT STORYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! :DD

Those two are sooooooooooooooo CUTE!!! I can't wait to see more of them!!

Damn Corey for all the evil things he said to poor Alex!! >_<

That last chapter was soooooo HOT! Absolutely LOVED it! XDD

Thank you so much for the great story! I can't wait for more!!! :D
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like the narrator's voice.
person Reike
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww Rafe and Alex they're cute!
Corey is a bastard...I wanna poke him with blunt objects.
I like how Rafe added a bit of comedy to the situation with his
"i'm an angry guy" speech!
person Rosei
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two

Love the low-keyness!!!
Love the humor!!!
Love the dialog!!!!
Love the tentativeness!!!
Love the internal dialog!!!!!!
Love these guys!!!!!

Thanks,
R
person Reike
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh I hate Corey muchly, let me hit him..right now!
Poor Alex *hugs* I want him, yes I do, he can belong with my
other pretties.
Rafe! Get your butt in gear and talk to him *nod*
I love it! More!
xxxx