rate_review Reviews

ahhhhh they're so cute!
I want them both please?
I love the development between them.
More right now!
R xxx

Hey, I like your story very much. It's nice to see how they both come closer to each other. I'm looking forward for the next chapter(s)....
Greetings Sandra

I love your story. I just read all you have posted so far in one sitting, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I enjoyed the interactions between the characters and the character developement.

I do have one qualm though. When Rafe is telling his story to Alex. You can't get tested for HIV the day after you're exposed. If you've contracted it, it won't show up for 12-14 weeks, sometimes not for 6 months after exposure. It's kind of a small detail I know. But it kinda messed with the flow of the whole chapter I think. It moved a little fast there.

Other than that I really did enjoy reading, like I said, can't wait for the next chanpter =]

yay! Joint winner!
Haha I loved this chapter.
The whole Rafe can't cook thing made me chuckle!
Ahh I love them both so much!
Nice one!
R xx

I would really like to answer the challenge, but...I Have no idea!! Your story leaves me speechless and I can`t imagine any further plots... So..I`m just reviewing (does that word exist??) Ok, as you probably already figured out, i like this story. It`s so sad...but also funny and kind of deep...

aha I get the poke thing now :S
Finallt dried out from that frigging rain!
Grr ok no killing Corey (damn!)
Buuuttt...

Can we have Rafe and Alex going on a date? But like everything that can go wrong does, because I don't think
they'd ever have a smooth sailing date. And I dunno maybe throw in a bit of Corey..he can be his usual bastard self and
then can get all jealous because Rafe's like 'yeah I'm on a date with Alex so there!'
Or something along those lines...maybe a bit of making out in a cinema? pfft!
Well that's my idea-ish!

Lovely update by the way... I just wanna hug Rafe close.
Alex is a cutie, bless him.

But yeah can we have some serious jealous Corey making? Just because I think the boys need to get their own back on
him.

Love yoooouuu
xx

Honestly not sure of what to do next - Something says now that you have revealed the reason for his HIV status, maybe seeing if he is still alive and if he is, to talk to him. Maybe have Alex with him.

Awww Rafe and Alex are soooo cute, I wanna hug them.
I'm gonna beat Corey, grrr what an asshole!
I loved the update =)

Oh no...Corey...I wanna hurt him, he's a bastard!
Yes he is.
Alex and Rafe are sooo cute together, I just wanna squeeze them
all up.
Loved the update =)
R x

Well this solves the mysterious job thing.