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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was sad.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. this is a really good story and i hope you update soon. i just found it and i'm adding you to my favorites and stalking you until this story is finished. great job - just wow.
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this ch it was well written with a lot of emotion. I never liked Corey so honestly when he died last ch I didn't much care. But after reading about his past with him, I think I got a more multidimensional picture of his character and I cared. I also got a great impression of the strong emotions that moved Rafe to grieve so much. I really liked this ch it was very mature and complex.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God this chapter!
I'm mixed feelings still about Corey.
It's soooo sad but really well written.
You almost made me cry.
I want more!
xx
I'm mixed feelings still about Corey.
It's soooo sad but really well written.
You almost made me cry.
I want more!
xx
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so, hoping to see more. I really like it. Its good. Stupid corey.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is a good idea/premise/feeling that you conveyed to us. You did capture the feeling of his desolation and anger fairly well.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such powerful writing. You managed to encompass all the thoughts a loved one has when they see someone they love buried. Thank you for sharing this. It was sorrowful and beautiful all at the same. (He finally cried.)
Can't wait for your next update. I hope it's soon.
Can't wait for your next update. I hope it's soon.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I just found this story and I absolutely am falling in love with it. Your style of writing is so different that it instantly drew me in. Just wondering how Rafe's twin got sick and died? And how Alex got sick? Oh and one more...is Corey sick?
Ok that's all I have so far.
Great story and look forward to the next chapter.
Ok that's all I have so far.
Great story and look forward to the next chapter.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What?!
OMG! He died?! ahhhh now I wanna know how!
I dunno if I'm like YAYYY! yet.
gah what a suprise that was!
Great update missy you so better be writing right now!
Love ya
R xx
OMG! He died?! ahhhh now I wanna know how!
I dunno if I'm like YAYYY! yet.
gah what a suprise that was!
Great update missy you so better be writing right now!
Love ya
R xx
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yummmmmmy and I love it!!!!
Sorry, but you're going to have to
change the title soon to,
"What We Did for Six Hours Straight!!!" HA!
Thanks,
R
Yummmmmmy and I love it!!!!
Sorry, but you're going to have to
change the title soon to,
"What We Did for Six Hours Straight!!!" HA!
Thanks,
R