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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I keep reading this last chapter, even though I've pretty much got it down by now? I have greatly enjoyed this story (so far). You've kept it interesting, that's for sure. Hope all's well.
-Lavi.
-Lavi.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have such a beautiful way of writing! So descriptive and at the same time simple but elegant. I really feel for your characters and you built up Alex's and Rafe's personalities so wonderfully and convincingly~ i'm just gonna sing your praises coz you deserve them! Italy sounds like a great adventure and healing time and I really love the twist in the latest chapter and the heart pangs that came with it. So looking forward to the next installment and I hope Alex continues to be a focus for later on in the story!!!!
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I wanna move to Italy too.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This feels really abrupt. You've invested all this time in a character, two characters, to have them both be of negligent worth overnight. If it was really love, he would've fought harder, or even tried to contact him the next day. Why Italy? That seemed kind of random.
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
r u serious??? i mean all the way to Italy i mean whats going to happen once their there and afterwards. and is alex an Rafe really done. and with andy with the way i read it i thought he actually was being serious about his feals an was actualllly starting to get along with his bro. i mean damn u realy like to through some curve balls in to this story. makes a girls head spin but keeps them on their toes.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update this story!!! If I check it one more time without an update I'm going to cry *again*
I really need to find out what happens.
I really need to find out what happens.
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Rafe, you're really being mean to him atm.
Frigging Alex, I thought he was an ok guy, but meh he fucked it up!
Nice update
xxxxxx
Frigging Alex, I thought he was an ok guy, but meh he fucked it up!
Nice update
xxxxxx
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well damn. just when things start to fall into place, shit slips out the side. nice job with the update. can't wait for more. -L
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nonono! You can NOT say updates are going to be irregular and then leave it like this! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I am so upset, I'm PISSED at Alex. How could he do that?!?!?
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I was freaking out there a little, but I just wanted to tell you that I really love this story, I check it for updates everyday. You are a very good writer, and you've really caused me to have strong feelings for your characters. That's not something everyone can do :)