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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is true in life that very often we cannot see that which is right in front of us and that includes our loved ones.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I not proud to say that I saw a lot myself in this poem--and it hurts me to think how much I've hurt my husband at times. this poem has really made me think about a lot of things....it's a sad poem but it ends on a note of hope. I hope that things will work out for you.
Linda
Linda
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There were a couple of lines that I like but it was a little choppy. I liked the message and I knew exactly what you were trying to get at and the feelings you were trying to express. Over all it was pretty good. Keep it up.
KP
KP