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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahhh! I just read this story... LOVE IT!! xD I like Zane/Xane... I like the way he is. Keep going please!
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh I adore this story! Goodness you, making me all happy like that. I love this little world you've created, and I also like that you have it all figured out, you know? This place obviously exists in your head, and makes sense there, so when you write about it it really seems like you're telling the story from something happening...
I'm just awesome with words today. You know what I mean though, right? Sure you do. Well I really like it. Keep going with the awesomeness and such and I will be a-waiting :)
I'm just awesome with words today. You know what I mean though, right? Sure you do. Well I really like it. Keep going with the awesomeness and such and I will be a-waiting :)
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, you're updating so fast, that's amazing! *happy* Can't wait for tomorrow, thx for an awesome story! <3
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like how you make the characters. They feel reall ^*^ And I love Pan's fighting spirit. Lol. You're doing a great job at writing this. Praises to you ^^
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh I can't wait for the next update!!!
This one was really good to tho! It's funny that almost every demons wanted to get the hell away form Xane!!! Muahaha!!!
I can't wait to read more! Thanks alot for the update! *hugs*
This one was really good to tho! It's funny that almost every demons wanted to get the hell away form Xane!!! Muahaha!!!
I can't wait to read more! Thanks alot for the update! *hugs*
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
This is very good, M-K-la. I was so happy to see an update. I like the world you've created and their transportation.
This is very good, M-K-la. I was so happy to see an update. I like the world you've created and their transportation.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!!
Hehe I can't wait to se hoe Pan reacts to the familiar face :P
Hehe I can't wait to se hoe Pan reacts to the familiar face :P
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
two updates in tow days it must be Christmas or some other gift giving holiday. -shakes hand vigorously- thank you
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I love your charecters I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I'm looking forward to more,keep up the good work.Update again soon *PLEASE*.