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for Wildfires and Whirlwinds

by Mikken05

person wynja
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
New reader here! I spent most of the day reading this, and I love it! The story, teh characters, your writing-style, all great! Have to watch out for this so I don't miss the update!
person angelmay
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes!
person jeazard
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, new chapter! *happy fangirl*

You can draw things that aren't allowed on dA? ...maybe I need to red up on its rules again. XD
But wherever you upload it, I'm sure I can speak for all of us by saying: FUCK YES we do want to see!
person HannaFO
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice update.
Kyle really has a deviant mind :P
hehe cant wait to see Pan and Xane's study session XD
person Avernion
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and bring those pictures on! yay ^-^

I think your characters' interactions are just so great. Makes it a wonderful read.
person Jetfire
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is soo cool, how do you manage to update so much? Hell I wish I could get rid of my writers block so I could update again.

I love your style its just so...normal, def like reading a good book. It feels like its not faked you know likee your not trying to write a way that isn't your own, its cool. I love Pan, he rocks. Not your usual victim and thankfully no angsting and no rape so def going to my faveourite stories this one. Can't wait for more.

Hugs Aduial
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay longer updates!!!!! they make me so happy. and i love ur little sketches of the crew. pan looks so flustered its cute lol. and heck yes we would want to c it if u posted it on Y! Well more about the story now-- i love it! Xanes gonna b Pans little lab rat 4 his paper lol. and i love his roommate. Kyle is suck a little back stabber. is there anything I dont like about this story? hmm.. nope dont think so :) keep on updating!!!!!!! (please??????)
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Zan everyone taking his life into there own hands. Well I guess it makes the story more interesting
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story especially Pan and Xane, they make such a cute couple. You know you probably would get more reviews if you took off the: You Must Be Logged In To Review This Story. Sometimes its a real pain in the ass to login if you're doing other things on the computer or if your not registered. My lazy ass would be the first of the two. I read your story since you had chapter 3 up. I have a lot, and I mean a lot of story ideas in my head but, I'm just to afraid to post them up. Actually I did have one story up along time ago and I got all these nice reviews and all but after the second chapter I took it down because I got scared. Well, enough of my rambling. I just want to say thank you for the chapters and fast ass updates. Bye O_o Bye.



Sighed,
Black Sheep: There's always one crazy motherfucker in the family.
person Sekre
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting story!