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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a delightful, funny story. Pan and Xane's interactions are so childish that it makes it easy to want them to be together. I laughed a little too loudly at Xane's admission that he's just a teeny, tiny bit retarded. But I hope that something more than studying goes on at the library! hint, hint, wink, wink
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! Update! Lucky me! Ah, kept giggling all through this chapter... poor Pan... he's in over his head...
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wohooo, I really love your story. I specially love Xane is so great (typically male if you ask me). Don't know any guy who doesn't act like a 3 year old when they're sulky.
I'm really curious still about why Pan can touch Xane without burning. Oh and by the way the sentence with the kitchen implement was just hilarious. I hope your writers block gets better. I feel for you. Suffering from it myself.
Hugs Aduial
I'm really curious still about why Pan can touch Xane without burning. Oh and by the way the sentence with the kitchen implement was just hilarious. I hope your writers block gets better. I feel for you. Suffering from it myself.
Hugs Aduial
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stories that nag you are evil...I know...
So...first chapter...pretty good! I love Pan and his naivete and Xane looks like a lot of fun.
And I noticed it didn't register with him what you wrote about Elementals mating with their own kind....leaving so many other possibilities...well....onto the next chapter
So...first chapter...pretty good! I love Pan and his naivete and Xane looks like a lot of fun.
And I noticed it didn't register with him what you wrote about Elementals mating with their own kind....leaving so many other possibilities...well....onto the next chapter
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I read the first chapter of this ages ago and was like 'no updates, harsh!' then suddenly I log on one day and find five more chapters, lol - I'm not sure if I've just unluckily missed the new chapters or you updated in one go, either ways very happy to have something so good to read ;) Xane and Pan make such a cute couple, but now you have me all curious about Kai and Tyler! Also Lio is such a cool character, I hope there's more of him in chapters to come ;) Love the story!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have only read chapter one at the moment, but i wanted to review to say i already love it!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
Pan needs a damn armor to kep Xanes hands of him *lol*
Pan needs a damn armor to kep Xanes hands of him *lol*
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Just finished the 2nd chapter, but before I get back to the story I just wanted to say that I am very much enjoying the story line 'till now! I love the chapter length as well *g*
And I believe Pan has gotten into something that will change his live!
I am going to read the rest of the chapters now....keep on writing!
Just finished the 2nd chapter, but before I get back to the story I just wanted to say that I am very much enjoying the story line 'till now! I love the chapter length as well *g*
And I believe Pan has gotten into something that will change his live!
I am going to read the rest of the chapters now....keep on writing!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, this is a very enjoyable story.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it!!!!!!!.........Xane is too cool!