rate_review Reviews

This is like a dream come true. I can now die happly. Thank you. I'm now going to go into my room and cry.

I have just discovered this little gemstone. I love the world you have created. I prefer being shown a new world through a character's eyes rather than being 'told' about it. Accepting things within Pan's world is easier because it is part of his lifestyle. D-District is a little creepy - all the toys in the yard, but nobody around and no cars....very, very creepy.

I look forward to more chapters. I'll be waiting.

update PLEASE!!! I really really really like your story, it's one of the much greater ones on here, and I'm really really happy that i found it! Everything is really nicely written, and i'm saying really a lot, i know, sorry, but your story is wonderful.

i like a lot the story!!!
can't wait to read more about Pan and Xane!
I wish Pan wasn't that childishly snappy though.

I know that feeling...I get to do tech support with 5hrs sleep...go go ME!

Great update and awaits patiently your next update (and even a tiny update for Just Ignore it would be amazing too!)

Lovely chapter!! And I lol'ed when I saw your cute drawing!! XDDDD

Hehe i always enjoy the little grab and go Xane tries to have on Pan's rear XD
As always a very enjoyable chapter!

Yaaaay.
This is delicious. Really interesting story, well written, great setup of the whole social dynamics and everything.
*Anxiously awaiting when Xane finally gets Pan into bed*
There was one inconsistency I noticed. Maybe you have an answer.
If all the food is instant, pre-processed stuff, then why were they using /coffee beans/ in the cafe? Shouldn't they be using the same ground up stuff that is instant coffee?
I really like Xane's character. He's the perfect mix of confident, witty and halfway considerate. XD
I'm wondering if it's just a standard thing that Demons don't respect humans' personal space.
I comman you to updateeeeee!!!! *wiggles fingers hypnotically*

*bows* you are a god (or goddess) this is one of THE most AMAZING stories ever. It has soo many different layers to it. It's just brilliant. I love the way pan is thrown by concerned and worried xane. I also think its great how much thought you've put into this, like D-district actually exists if you know what I mean.

I worship the ground xane walks on...want him! Can i have him please?! pretty pretty please. And yes Pan does have a mouth on him but hey, it wouldn't be half as funny. I just can't wait for more. You've really made my day (it was pretty crap, ill, stress and over 12 hours of work) so thank you.

TONS OF HUGS Aduial

Yeah, was hoping for some "good stuff" to happen in the library. Maybe their next study date?
Kinda cute when Xane started to get a little frisky when they were on their way to the library. He's always trying to cop a feel. Hopefully, Xane will get lucky soon! (Just pushing my subtle hint)