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December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I so glade you continued this story its one of my fav. Everything from the world to the charecters are just so great thatit makes me wnat to reread it several times. Keep up the good work
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will you still update?? I like this story... and I wanna know what Pan is =))
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I keep an eye on your story, I really liked it. I hope you can update soon;)
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January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Finally Xane says something to Pan! Honestly, the little guy gets on my nerves : ) awww, but I still like him. I hope he comes around soon and actually acts nice to Xane for once. I like Xane, he's pretty fun.
Looking foward to the next chapter. Love the deal that Xane and Pan made ...... wondering if they're gonna stick to it though....
Update soon please! Can't wait.
Looking foward to the next chapter. Love the deal that Xane and Pan made ...... wondering if they're gonna stick to it though....
Update soon please! Can't wait.
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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
new character! Lio seems like an interesting guy. I'm assuming he's a demon. great job!
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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Pan and having his brain messed with. I like that Xane is so protective. Maybe Pan isn't a water demon like I first though, but an air demon? Maybe? Who knows! great job though. I really like it! :)
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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
0.0 Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Kyle will be okay. great job! Xane and Pan are interesting together. Maybe Pan isn't a demon and I'm overthinking. IDK. great job!
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just thought I'd stop and point out something I noticed in the past couple of chapters.
You changed the time of Pan's class three different times. You first mentioned that Pan glanced at the phone and realized that it was 12:00, and that he still had to sit through another half hour of 'Mr. Detective' before his next class ... that would put the class at 12:30
The second time you did it, you mentioned that it was 12:30 and Pan wanted to get to class, Kyle said that his class wasn't until 1.
And the last time you did it(and this one could just be a mistake on my part) was when Kyle was talking to Xane, and told him to call Pan at 12:35 because Pan's class was at 12:45. Once again, this one might just be a mistake, and he's got different classes that day. It is college after all.
Anyway, thought I'd point it out to you. Other than that, it's a great story so far.
You changed the time of Pan's class three different times. You first mentioned that Pan glanced at the phone and realized that it was 12:00, and that he still had to sit through another half hour of 'Mr. Detective' before his next class ... that would put the class at 12:30
The second time you did it, you mentioned that it was 12:30 and Pan wanted to get to class, Kyle said that his class wasn't until 1.
And the last time you did it(and this one could just be a mistake on my part) was when Kyle was talking to Xane, and told him to call Pan at 12:35 because Pan's class was at 12:45. Once again, this one might just be a mistake, and he's got different classes that day. It is college after all.
Anyway, thought I'd point it out to you. Other than that, it's a great story so far.
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot so far. the whole demon thing is an interesting twist compared to most people's beliefs. Great job! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Xane though he does seem a little strange. I was wondering why he could sleep with Xane and not be affected. My guess is he has some water demon in him if he isn't completely a demon. great job! I love the long chapters!