rate_review Reviews

Hiya!

Just read all the chapters in one go and let me tell, I just loved this! Xane's such hilarious combination of old, bratty and compassionate demon that it's really refreshing to see one. Of course I'm sooo curious to know why Pan can touch him or why the headaches are torturing him - I don't believe it was just the stress. ;)

Please update soon~

That was really great!!! I totally love this story!!!! And I want to know why he can touch the fire demon and what is wron with all the headaches!!!! I've got a really forebroding feeling^^ Please update soon I want to know more about your world!!!! See you again soon!!!

I so love this story so far, it's interesting, the characters are very detailed and there is this hint of mystery that keeps reader guessing. But gosh your keeping me on edge, when will the fireworks be lit? I'm still waiting for the change of emotion and more physical involvement. Just don't stop, I love a good read.

So I love your story. The plot is interesting and relatively complex and the characters seem like real people.

I have one small critiques for you:
The line "people don't orgasm if they're not enjoying themselves in some way."... This is both not true (orgasm is a reflex) and perpetuates a dangerous myth (particularly in the case of guys) that rape was in fact not rape because they got off. I am almost 100% certain you didn't mean it that way, but I think it'd be supremely worthwhile to switch that line. "And you can't deny that you liked it - you were pulling me closer the whole time." or something like that. Anything - anything at all - that doesn't imply that orgasm = desire.

Anyway, that aside, I hope you update more regularly than you had! This is actually a good story!

Yay for a new chapter. :D Though it did pain me. It reminded me so much about my school xD Ahhhh.... the pain...

Awesome! It was a very big surprise to see this :D I'm curious how you are going to develop the relationship, It's been a while so I don't remember all the little details that have happened so far but IT kinda seemed like I had no idea before. Although now with them being sweeter I suppose the ingredients are there to work with :) can't wait for more! :D

O.M.G !!!!
I remember this story !! A good one !
But it's been ages since the last update !!!
I'm going to read it again from the beginning...
Welcome back XDD

Oh! I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY that you're continuing this story! *does a happy dance* I lost hope that I'll be able to read more of Pan and Xane. I like them so much. ^-^ I wonder what will Xane do when he finds out that Pan failed while having the most acurate information straight froma demon book. Oh, boy. I'd be pissed as hell in his place. XD
Can't wait for more. ;) But I will. No matter how much it takes. XD I'm not stoping loving this story anytime soon. ^-^
Thank you very much for the update! I'm looking for for more. ;)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Just wanted to say I love the story! Can't wait for more! ;)