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i can't find this story on your site its pretty good but now im sad that i can't get to it

I am very sorry you are discontinuing this story. I really liked it.

i actually feel a little sorry for aravath.. great chapter. cant wait for more :)

ooh, i like where this is going! i hope nothing happens to little dao. please update again soon:)

30 Reviews for only 3 chapters now! And almost 2000 hits! You're doing a good job so far. The plot is developing and you're giving the readers little tidbits of info on the characters gradually, which is good. Aravath is a tortured soul, I see that now.

Before, it wasn't known whether or not he wanted to destroy the welythians(I think they're called) for greed, glory, or whatever. Seems like he wants revenge for his loss, but that doesn't justify what he's doing to Edwyn and his little brother. Of course, it's often those in such pain [like aravath] who do not think clearly and without bias. Ah, maybe Edwyn and his brother will open Aravath's eyes? or not. Ha ha...

I've got to say that's it's unbelievably stupid that people take their anger out on a whole lot of people because of what one (or a few) individuals did! But Edwyn's people shouldn't have been so cruel to others, that's somewhat bringing upon themselves.

Great chapter.

Ok, we now know that the Welythians tortured and killed Aravath's lover Daymon 10 years ago and that is why he hates them so much. I just hope Dao is not hurt, though I am a little concerned by Aravath's thoughts after listening to Edwyn tell Dao that he promised he would be back for him, by remembering a similar conversation he had with Daymon and then never saw him alive again.

How will Edwyn bring back Garmoth and Terrin to Aravath without drawing their suspicion and will he be in time to save Dao?

I anxiously await your next update.

I love the story so far....but i hate the characters right now...i've never had that happen O_o

Can't wait to see where you take this

I'm hooked. I like the layers gradually being added to your characters, and the plot itself seems to be pretty interesting. I'm so curious to see how a romance will flourish between these two. Great style you have. Wish the chapters were longer, though.

I love slave stories they are so hot. Hopefully we will give you enough reviews to ispire the next few chapters, it would be great to know a little more about why the Lord hates his neighbors so much.