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for The Only Girl

by kasin

person Maria
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update I to see what Mike does to Davey
schedule June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Did you abandon this story or was that the end? it's fantastic! You should for sure continue this story
person Sweetlooking89
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one hellevua a story... I feel bad for Vera. She seems to really love her brother and in this chapter she was really taken adventage of I hope her Mike doesn't kill him LOL!

Great Job, please post more soon :)
person k86
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
please update soon!
person Lorenzo Soledad
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! Hope there'll be more...?

GO MIKE!!
Mike should kick (and keep kicking) Davy in the groin until his balls explode. Make it so bad Davy can NEVER use he's dick again ever *evil laughter*

(before anyone asks, no i'm not a chick or gay either) bwahahaha
person e111
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh pleeease update soon
this story is really good!
person e123
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh pleeeeease update!
this story is so good!! I can't wait for the next chapter:)
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is wow! Will there be a Ch 3? I'm not big on insect, but I like this story. I hope you'll continue it? maybe get the 3rd brother involved... Please let me know if you add more.
person Mika
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please UPDATE this story ASAP because I'm dying to know what happens next.