rate_review Reviews

Wow. This just goes to show how deep love can be. Whether it be of the same sex or not, it doesn't really matter. I have nothing against 'homos'. If you love someone of the same sex, good. be happy. Ya know? Also, wanted to day, funny, my best female friend is named Cassie! lol coincidence.

Whoa! WHat the fuck did I just read? Possibly, one of the best F/F stories ever! I liked how you wrote this. You weren't 'nail on the head' specific (except for 'breats' and 'nipple') but the rest really captivated my imagination! I like the humor value in the intro also. Very well written!

Short and sweet. I liked the contrast between Lyssa and Kai. Lyssa is the silly, fun loving girl and Kai the more serious of the two. Yet they come together very nicely. Hope to see more from your work.

Very Nice

Good story!

I was quite impressed for a one-shot. There aren't many that flow so smoothly and so creatively as yours does.

On the technical side of things, I didn't see and spelling and grammatical errors, so that's a plus. Artistically, it seemed very poetic at some points, and the flow of your story was quick and heated in a very delightful way, as I said earlier, that most one-shots PWPs tend to lack. The dénouement of your story was realistic, cute, and dare I say, storybook in a good sense of the term.

Excellent job. Keep up the good work!

Nice job! And you know I feel about "yuri" as you do about "yaoi", but this was great! By the by, do start warning me before you threaten to sic me on people in a new place. I need to know about these things, you know.
I'd compliment on grammar and whatnot, but for one thing, it's already been done, and for another, you know I know your grammar is good, and I tell you this frequently.
Woo, review number two to me~!