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for Of Twins, Fish Poo, And

by icesk8ergrrl86

person Morgeth
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I first noticed this story, I didn't expect to like it (I'm not generally a fan of boys who don't wanna be boys). But when you didn't update for a little while, I actually missed it, and now I am totally in love. I just wanna snuggle Kiri and tell him it'll all work out one way or another, he's so cute. I hope you keep up the great work, and I can't wait to see what happens after that kiss.
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh! so sweet, but so short!
ASOTA
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! that's embarrassing!
ASOTA
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So...I like this. I wasn't sure at first because I didn't really like "Because I'm a boy" but I do like the way you are writing this. It's very cute and Kiri is not only very adorable but funny. (I think he has some serious issues though). I'm quite looking forward to this next chapter because I know what happens after the bath ; ) Keep it up please.
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the talk about fish poo is a little odd but great story!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
ASOTA
person Shota
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I laughed every time Kiri thought about fish crap. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person BennyPeace
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww. haha I like this concept.

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