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for Jinx's flight

by Darkangel19

schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reading my story. right now I have a reading block post as soon as I can
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of promise, but your grammar and structure needs work. I suggest getting a beta to help you out. There is so much that you will be able to get across to the readers once you polish things up a bit.