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Ohhh please you just have to write the next chapter. Ellie sounds so adorable!!!!! He is such a stupid jerk and he didnt even give her a reason for breaking up and then he just stands there while they leave what an ass!!! I think that she should get an explanation as to why he broke up with her and see if she forgives him or not to be apart of the daughters life. BUT IT HAD BETTER BE A GOOD EXCUSE.

nice!!! update :)

I think it's a nice plot. I hope Henry and Charlotte will be civil soon. *winks*
Eleanor seems so cute! *O*
I can't wait for more. Keep it up!

I would like to know more about the characters, I am assuming that Henry must be more well off and could have helped them had he known. I love Charlotte, she is fiesty and strong and raised her daughter herself. I hope she doesn't give Henry an easy time, he needs to grovel majorly! Maybe there can be a guy in Charlotte's life that will make Henry jealous?
Great story and great first chapters! Please update soon.