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December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!!! This is amazing... when can I expect more??? Can I pay you??? E-cookies? REAL Cookies???(I'm doing my yearly xmas bake lemmie know where to send them!!!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story, I hope you update soon.
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review chapter 1-3
Not bad for you first story. One thing - the chapters could be a little longer. Otherwise, I like the two main charactors so far and your writing is pretty good.
Looking forward to your next update.
Not bad for you first story. One thing - the chapters could be a little longer. Otherwise, I like the two main charactors so far and your writing is pretty good.
Looking forward to your next update.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it too - please post another chapter soon
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I like it a lot, please continue! ^_^
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Hehe can't wait for the auktion :D Thanks for the update!
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
word of advise...edit your chapters. grammatical mistakes can kill a story for me.
other than that, i'm looking forward to more.
other than that, i'm looking forward to more.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is even more interesting now. I cant wait to read more.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting premise, and I am looking forward to more!
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please. :)