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August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Hope you continue it and update quickly!!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fuck Li's fucked up! I just want to kill him!!!
He's such a bastard!!
I wonder what's gonna happen next?
I hope it's be something good! T___T lol
Anyways, thanks for the update!
He's such a bastard!!
I wonder what's gonna happen next?
I hope it's be something good! T___T lol
Anyways, thanks for the update!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very "Misery". I love that it's set in Japan too.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!i cant bielieve jonas is dead! it was so sad rite he n conner met up agen n all...but im glad u finnaly updated agen
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!
Just some criticisms to make your story flow better and more accurately.
maybe it's just me, but why do most of your "Japanese" people have Chinese names? "Li" and "Wong" are Chinese names, not Japanese, at least, to my knowledge.
And is everyone speaking in Japanese? Because not a lot of people speak fluent English in Japan. Conner and Li seem to be having very fluent conversations-- just making me wonder what language they're speaking in.
Waiting for another chapter!
Just some criticisms to make your story flow better and more accurately.
maybe it's just me, but why do most of your "Japanese" people have Chinese names? "Li" and "Wong" are Chinese names, not Japanese, at least, to my knowledge.
And is everyone speaking in Japanese? Because not a lot of people speak fluent English in Japan. Conner and Li seem to be having very fluent conversations-- just making me wonder what language they're speaking in.
Waiting for another chapter!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's one twisted puppy.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update soon! I know Li's sorta twisted and all but I sorta wish they COULD live happily ever after somehow lol
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man..... Poor Cornner!!!! Li is way too fucked up!! He disassociates himself from everything he does wrong but I think that it'll hit him HARD when he'll have no choice but to see the truth...
And I'm still wondering who he is really? 'cause I'm starting to have real big doughs about his humanity... >> lol
Anyways,I really can't wait to read more of ur sorry! I really love it! And I wonder how things will turn out for Cornner! >__< I hope he'll be ok!
And I'm still wondering who he is really? 'cause I'm starting to have real big doughs about his humanity... >> lol
Anyways,I really can't wait to read more of ur sorry! I really love it! And I wonder how things will turn out for Cornner! >__< I hope he'll be ok!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Feel the love! This is a great story so far and I mean the spelling mistakes aren't so atrocious; I've seen worse. I'm glad Connor is kicking butt and high-tailing it out of there. I have to say Li is so delusional I love reading his interpretation of events.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story
man is he crazy I hope he get his ass kicked at some point X3
please update soon XD
man is he crazy I hope he get his ass kicked at some point X3
please update soon XD